Wednesday, January 13, 2010

Words and Silences


An online collaborator on a writing project recently mentioned to me that he doesn't always "get" dialogue in wrestling. As for me, I'm always writing in taunting bravado, snarling verbal domination, or humiliating tirades. The dialogue makes it as much a head game as a battle of bodies, and both together are a bigger turn on for me than either one separately.
Similarly, I also recently replied to a reader's comment by saying that the Enforcer's epic beatdown on already beaten down Brad Rochelle in BG East's Contract 4 left me desperately wanting to hear the big baddy say something. He's creepily quiet as he tosses, slams, pries and pummels sweetly suffering Brad. Brad cries and whimpers, "why...?" as he's twisted into astonishing angles, but the Enforcer's silence is somehow even more dominating. He refuses to explain himself, to answer any question, to justify his devastating mugging. Still... if he just once whispered, "'Cause I want to see you beg..." I'd have spontaneously exploded at the very instant.
Still again, I realize that the topic of dialogue came up in my review on Monday of Rock Hard Wrestling's latest release. The first match between Cameron and Tommy is technically nice grappling. Two big, gorgeous bodies working up a sweat (perhaps enhanced, nevertheless), is art worth standing up and taking note of in my book. But they're so eerily silent as they fight. It's a little more like watching a chemistry experiment than the battle of two cocky studs both believing that they are fated to prevail. Words could tell me that this isn't just about muscles and skill, but it's also about balls (and cocks, for that matter), as two big boys play the game that boys have always played throughout time: whose is bigger; who's badder; who will be the conqueror and who will be conquered.
The dialogue is one of the things that makes BG East's new Fantasymen match debuting Lon Dumont such a turn on for me. Lon is barking at Eddy throughout the match, demanding that he flex for him. "I've seen that one!" he shouts when Eddy pumps out another double bicep in submission. Lon carries off cocky taunting convincingly, wrapping the physical action into a through-story based on Lon's scene-opening challenge that he doesn't give away poses of his hot body for free. Lon never accepts a whimpering submission from Eddy without snapping at him, "That's not good enough!" and demanding a new, stunning flex of Eddy's sweat-soaked, bulging body. Hell yes, that's what I'm talking about!
One more example of what's working for me: Can-Am is unfolding a new product called the Arena in their premium pay site, Can-Am Max,. It stars BG East bad boy, Aryx Quinn, new face Brian Bodine, and g---orgeous Rusty Stevens. After the first match up, Rusty has Brian beaten, fucked, and lying on his stomach in humiliation. Before Rusty can leave in undisputed victory, Aryx charges in, challenging Rusty to an East Coast vs. West Coast battle. They circle Brian's beaten body, trading insults. Rusty is post-match naked and hard as a board, with that massive muscled bubblebutt bouncing with each stride. Aryx is in shiny gear and boots. Aryx says that if Rusty thinks Brian was competition, then perhaps he should walk across the street to the grade school to find more opponents he could beat up. Aryx is supposed to be the fast talking challenger, but Rusty has a very quick wit and sharp tongue that manages to best Aryx in the head-game of improv taunts, in my opinion. The constant circling of naked Brian, Rusty's stunning, huge body aroused and on display, and the playground choreography of the taunt, the challenge, and the challenge accepted is by far the most erotic part of this match thus far (including the fuck scene).
I probably write too much dialogue in my wrestling fiction for some. The quotation marks probably serve as little more than a distraction to many fellow kinksters out there groaning to just get on with it, start the tussle, slam some bodies together. But for me, the taunts, tantrums, screams and submissions are absolutely delightful icing on the cake of hardbodies, sweat, and suffering. The talk tells the story of not just physical domination, but the domination of one man's will over another. It's about the ante up, the smack down, and the claim at the end of the day when one stud is helpless on his back and the other is reminding him, "I told you so."

4 comments:

  1. Great post!
    I agree, the dialogues do add alot more to a already good match! I do enjoy them very much, both in your matches and actual videos. I for one hope you will continue writing them into your wrestling fiction.

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  2. That's the spirit! (oh, and... Bring it on, mother fucker!)

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  3. agreed, the verbal taunting heightens the action. i love calling out a dude, telling him how i'm gonna destroy him.

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